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Yet again I am lonely today;
Holding onto the colourful
memories of the past,
I try to
find a tiny flicker of hope buried somewhere deep inside.
The waves & shore play a game
of touch & go, and the grey clouds darken the
horizon
Tears blur my eyes as I tighten
my grip.
‘Let go’ my heart screams – my mind refuses to hear its cries and
continues to be in a self denial.
How soon the wheels of time
turn….
It was just yesterday that I was
surrounded by the warm rays,
And today this breeze sends chills down my spine.
Hope is all that I am left with
now as I close my eyes.
Clutching my hopes tightly I send
a silent prayer to Him to feel the warmth once again.
Oh Me, you just struck a deep chord, right inside. These are exactly my emotions, exactly what I want to say to myself, my mind, my heart and maybe her. I don't know. Maybe this heart will always remain hopeful and maybe those memories will forever be buried inside my mind, until I keep going to them everyday, every moment till the wheel of my time bring her back to me, someday. One of your best posts till now, for I can see a faint light of your true-self saying something through these words. Or it's because I am lonely too, holding onto the colourful memories of the past.
ReplyDeleteLeo says, keep writing! You never cease to strike a powerful positive chord. And that's what he loves about Me. :D
Yes Leo....maybe we will always be hopeful.You are right when you say that I am say something through these words...rather I am saying too many things through this post. I am touched after reading your comment. Believe me when I say you are not the only one who is lonely and holding onto the colourful memories of the past.
DeleteThanks for such lovely, encouraging words Leo :)
wow..what a poignant poem!
ReplyDeletelovely lines..
Thanks Uma!
DeleteHope. Is a strong word and an even stronger power. Loved this emotion-stirring poem! :)
ReplyDeleteI completely agree to you, thanks - glad you loved it!
DeleteThis is really...really beautiful!:)
ReplyDeleteThank you thank you thank you :)
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteI specially liked the line 'The waves & shore play a game of touch & go'
:)
:o)
DeleteThis happens to be my favourite too !
Thanks so much..!
Poignant :O)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
DeleteLovely !
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteBeautiful words !!!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Diana and thanks a ton for the follow too!
DeleteI truly appreciate it.
hmmmmmmmmmm well I am sure HE will answer :)
ReplyDeletedont be sad get up and do something that you have always wanted to do and it will be a beautiful day again :)
Bikram's
AMEN, thanks for such encouraging words..
DeleteVery sad but beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nikky so much for understand the underlying feelings in this poem!
Deletedilemma...of our memories to have it or not...
ReplyDeletebeautifully structured poem ... nice way to depict one's state of utmost quandary...!!!
This dilemma is something we all go through confusing us more and more... our state of mind is dilly dallying like a pendulum.
DeleteThank you:)
Oh this is some poem !! you have written with so much emotions. You have penned it down nicely :) But at some point of time we all are lonely isn't it ? But that's just for a while ? Otherwise we always have some or other good people around us :)
ReplyDeleteKeep writing poems.You write nicely them. You have strong connection with them. Although I am poor at understanding the depths of poem many a times but I still feel so :)
Yes I love writing poems as I always dreamt of becoming a poet and not a writer!
Delete:)
Glad you loved it. thanks so much <3