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I see you peeping through the clouds alluring me to look at you;
I turn around only to find you nowhere in sight.
I prance here and there in search of you and find you laughing at my folly.
You take me in your arms and look into my eyes; in that moment I lived a thousand lives.
I feel your warmth all around me as your rays colour my world in various hues.
I bask in your light and love which tells me I am special.
You stretch your arms to ask me and I nod my head to say I do.
Lovely words!:)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!!
DeleteWow... that was so beautiful...simple and so poignant. I absolutely loved it girl!!
ReplyDeleteYes.... I feel love sometimes is best expressed through simple words.
DeleteThanks :o)
This is perfect short story I see with a tune playing behind. A perfect love story in this not much perfect world sounds like a song!
ReplyDeleteBut you know what? Positive milieu and optimism will always be around until we have you, Me. You're too good. :)
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DeleteI simply wonder sometimes how can you be so good at writing comments too. Your words are truly wonderful and am honoured to hear them from you...thank you sooo much!!
You take me in your arms and look into my eyes; in that moment I lived a thousand lives. Wow!
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Arti
Thank so much Arti.... these are my favourite too. Was the closest option I could think of to recreate the real emotions :)
Deletenice
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteBeautiful... can't say enough...
ReplyDeleteI can still understand....;)
DeleteThanks!
And I do like it.
ReplyDeleteKeep writing :)
Thank you very much!!
DeleteYou do .. yayyyyyyyyy goood :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful romantic poem ..
Bikram's
Thank so much Bikram....yes I do!
DeleteSimple and beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteBeautiful, Me. It just makes the reader feel good about themselves.It creates dew drops and green leaves and a drizzle and a zephyr all at once. It made me think of a polka dotted dress and bare feet and a skipping rope. and ofcourse, someone special :)
ReplyDeleteWow toffee....that was such a sweet comment. I am really glad to know I could make you think of someone special... as I was thinking about someone special too while writing this poem! ;)
DeleteVery nice is all I can say.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.... !
DeleteLovely !!.. so romantic :)...
ReplyDeleteThanks ...romance is definately in the air!
DeleteTo tell you the truth I didn't know that you write this genre(romantic) as well.I cannot understand these things much. Anyways nice attempt I would say :)
ReplyDelete"Romance is relative to hate" :)
:o)
DeleteYes I do write this genre too. The way I like to say my blog is about 3 things - Live-love-Laugh!
Appreciate your honesty though.
Aha finally you published my comment :P
DeleteOhh glad to know.3 Ls of blog :)
I am glad that you liked my honesty.
Yes I did :)
DeleteI mostly do unless the comment has something obnoxious!! yes thats what my blog is all about - you can read more about it on the About this Blog page too!
Very romantic :)
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
Deleteis a congrats in order? That was sweet:)
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton!
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