Sunday, June 24, 2012

Weird Love (Flash Fiction)


Ouch…cant you do this a little bit slowly....’ he winced in pain. She glared at him in anger and retorted, ‘Why don’t you do things slowly? It seems as if you enjoy these accidents.’ He smiled impishly, ’No. I enjoy having you fussing over me like this; anything to bask in this attention’. One look in his eyes and all her doubts vanished. Despite everything he said yesterday she was sure how important she was to him.  ‘Love is so weird’, she thought, ‘Last night we were mad at each other and today we are mad for each other.

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27 comments:

  1. Wow wow and wow...that was so well said. Love indeed is so weird :)

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    1. Thanks....Yes I agree it is.

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  2. Oh, this Love
    Oh, this Love
    I wish I knew
    What is love;
    and what will I be in love.

    Love is a living thing perhaps; can shake the world; ruins people; and still most of us want to fall in it. Nicely written story Me!

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    1. Loved your lines Leo...very true. I agree to your thoughts completely.

      Thanks so much!

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  3. Well , that is how love is!!!nicely put..:)

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  4. Wow that was wonderful read dearie.....Loved the way you have spun the tale......have posted part 5 of my short story:))) TC

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    1. Thanks so much, glad you liked it.

      Read it and commented too :D

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  5. Love, with all its complexity, is beautiful :)

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    1. I agree completely. Love is the most beautiful thing!

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  6. Thats how the made-for-each-others end up being :) Lovely!

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    1. Yes very true dear, thanks!

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  7. Mad and made for each other :)

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    1. Yes Ghazala, very truly said.

      Welcome here, hope to see you more often!

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    1. Thanks so much Ritesh, welcome here and hope to see you more often!

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  9. Awwwwwwww how cute! Yes, there are days when you can't stand the other person, want to run away from them and can't bear their flaws. But at the end of the day, all I want to do is cuddle up and sleep on his chest <3 :) *blush*

    Hugs!!

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    1. Chooochweet <3

      Aaekay I guess this is the reason why love is also called weird!

      And only love can make us oversee their flaws and continue to love them...just like that :)

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  10. Brings out the truth of true relation...no matter how wrong or worse the things are people who are true to any relation would surely break all fences and bridge all rivers just to ensure that you are fine...!!!

    loved it :)

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    1. Yes that is how relationships are! We fight, we hurt, we cry...but in the end we love and that is what is the most important thing which keeps it going!

      Thank you for loving it <3

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  11. Oho again you tried making me loose but this time actually I got lost in the fiction had to read few times so at the end you are the winner only :P

    You flash fictions are usually crisp and to the point this one too.

    Keep writing them :)

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    1. :D

      I hope you finally got it!

      Thanks

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