The award (55 fiction)



He let out a puff of smoke and continued his trail of thoughts. He had never imagined one mistake could do this. His mind went back to the awards night where he met her. He had gone to get one and came back with two - A literary award for his debut novel & AIDS.

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Comments

  1. wow !!:) So this is sure that your story ends will not be straight forward ;)
    Interesting thoughts at this time. So I am seeing some trend in your flash fiction they are roaming around social issues ;). It's nice.
    Never put down your thinking cap :)

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    1. :)

      Straight forward endings to stories are something I feel are cliche now..!!

      Yup off late there are too many thoughts jumping inside my brain and mostly on such issues... glad you liked it. Trying hard to keep my thinking cap on my head!

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  2. owh!! that was a unexpected end.. grt

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  3. Two awards! Great. Hope he doesn't "give" his second award to many other people.

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  4. WOW! Such an unexpected ending!
    Loved it. Seems to have forgotten to practice safe sex.

    Hugs!

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    1. :)

      Yup... sometimes we are on a high when we make mistakes which we repent later!

      Thanks for loving it!

      TC <3

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  5. Ohhhhhhhh

    usually we stop thinking when we are on cloud nine .. Something ot learn from this little story

    Bikram's

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    1. ha you are right... we usually do stop thinking when we are super excited!!

      :D

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