Metro Diaries: Unlocked

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Switching off his alarm Salil got up from the bed and walked towards the balcony. He did not need an alarm to wake up today though as sleep evaded him completely. He had spent the whole night tossing and turning on the bed. Dawn announced its arrival with orange rays of the sun kissing the earth. He saw a golden wave engulfing everything around him in tight embrace. Stretching his arms he admired the beauty around him wondering how mesmerizing it all looked. 


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  1. Kalpana Solsi14 September 2013 at 23:48

    ........and after wakes up from her slumber hope she understands his love for her.Nice take on the WOW prompt.

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    1. Me14 September 2013 at 23:53

      Oh yes Kalpana she does:)

      Thanks so much!!

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  2. Afshan15 September 2013 at 00:28

    Aah the colors so well embedded in a romantic way
    Beautiful privy !
    U r so good at writing romantic episodes :)

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    1. Me15 September 2013 at 11:59

      Thanks Afshan :)

      Romance is something I love writing the most... and it is a genre that is there forever in my mind.Perhaps thats what makes me write them soo much!!

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  3. Rainbow Hues15 September 2013 at 01:44

    How nice and lovely and romantic....and how pretty! I loved it! Thanks :)

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    1. Me15 September 2013 at 12:01

      Thanks so much Kajal :)

      Your comments always make me smile !

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  4. Martha J. M. Orlando15 September 2013 at 05:39

    Some of us take more convincing than others to know the true power of love. Here, dear one, you have made it so crystal clear, yet woven a web of suspense over what might happen next.
    My thought? I pray they live happily ever after! :)
    Beautiful!

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    1. Me15 September 2013 at 12:04

      :)

      I just love the way you leave such beautiful comments on my blog Martha they are so touching, inspiring and at the same time manage to make me smile.

      I would say AMEN to your lovely thought!!!

      Thanks a ton, your comments are always looked forward to...

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  5. AaeKay :)15 September 2013 at 09:29

    This is beautiful! The truth is we never understand how much we need/love a person until we are going to lose them.

    Wonderfully written!

    Hugs!

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    1. Me15 September 2013 at 11:59

      True Aaekay and that is perhaps the most wonderful thing about love <3

      Thanks so much :)

      Love and hugs

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  6. pravir15 September 2013 at 09:51

    Again you have done the best pv.Very simple love story expressed as heart touching way .Wow for Wow.GBU.

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  7. Gyanban15 September 2013 at 23:39

    First time here - nice read.

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  8. Ramakant Pradhan16 September 2013 at 00:37

    Lovely portrayal of the protagonist's conflict of thoughts. Great understanding of human feelings I must say.

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    1. Me16 September 2013 at 23:48

      Thank you so much Ramakant :)

      Truly loved your comment, touched!

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  9. anuymous dev16 September 2013 at 05:21

    Oh so romantic privy and the way you implanted the colours adds to its beauty.Indeed A WOW post!!

    http://sailorswiferamblings.blogspot.com/2013/09/thefacebookmania.html

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    1. Me16 September 2013 at 23:49

      Thanks so much:)

      I appreciate your stopping by today and leaving such a lovely comment here!

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  10. Arvind Passey16 September 2013 at 10:58

    An intriguing story... and I realise that intrigue too has a medley of colours.

    Nice post.

    Arvind Passey
    www.passey.info

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    1. Me16 September 2013 at 23:51

      Thank you, coming from you this truly means a lot to me!!

      :)

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  11. jaish_vats16 September 2013 at 14:08

    You are really good at weaving stories on the complications in human relationships esp romance and love. Nice

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    1. Me16 September 2013 at 23:52

      Thanks so much Jaish... it is just that mad romantic in me that comes out every time :D

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  12. Namrata16 September 2013 at 17:07

    Simple yet profound...a point of realization..I am happy that he realized before the morning came over..:)

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    1. Me16 September 2013 at 23:53

      Oh yes.... otherwise maybe it would have been too late :P
      Thank you!

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  13. Shiva17 September 2013 at 11:27

    Wow...loved each line.. you have wrapped so much romance in the words interwoven with words... Lucky him that he realised it just in time

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    1. Me17 September 2013 at 23:41

      Thanks so much Shiva.... I am glad my intention of writing reflecting in those words!!

      :)

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  14. Sridevi Nayak K19 September 2013 at 00:10

    Very beautiful yet strikingly emotional. I love love stories from you :D

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    1. Me19 September 2013 at 21:37

      :)

      Thanks Sridevi and I love lovely comments from you :)

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  15. Rejo John20 September 2013 at 22:24

    Gooooooood write-up. Reminds me of how sometimes relationships can be complicated.

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    1. Me20 September 2013 at 23:02

      Thanks Rejo so much for stopping by!! :)

      It's a pleasure to have you with your lovely comments!

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