Metro Diaries: Unlocked



 
Switching off his alarm Salil got up from the bed and walked towards the balcony. He did not need an alarm to wake up today though as sleep evaded him completely. He had spent the whole night tossing and turning on the bed. Dawn announced its arrival with orange rays of the sun kissing the earth. He saw a golden wave engulfing everything around him in tight embrace. Stretching his arms he admired the beauty around him wondering how mesmerizing it all looked. 


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Comments

  1. ........and after wakes up from her slumber hope she understands his love for her.Nice take on the WOW prompt.

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    1. Oh yes Kalpana she does:)

      Thanks so much!!

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  2. Aah the colors so well embedded in a romantic way
    Beautiful privy !
    U r so good at writing romantic episodes :)

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    1. Thanks Afshan :)

      Romance is something I love writing the most... and it is a genre that is there forever in my mind.Perhaps thats what makes me write them soo much!!

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  3. How nice and lovely and romantic....and how pretty! I loved it! Thanks :)

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    1. Thanks so much Kajal :)

      Your comments always make me smile !

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  4. Some of us take more convincing than others to know the true power of love. Here, dear one, you have made it so crystal clear, yet woven a web of suspense over what might happen next.
    My thought? I pray they live happily ever after! :)
    Beautiful!

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    1. :)

      I just love the way you leave such beautiful comments on my blog Martha they are so touching, inspiring and at the same time manage to make me smile.

      I would say AMEN to your lovely thought!!!

      Thanks a ton, your comments are always looked forward to...

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  5. This is beautiful! The truth is we never understand how much we need/love a person until we are going to lose them.

    Wonderfully written!

    Hugs!

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    1. True Aaekay and that is perhaps the most wonderful thing about love <3

      Thanks so much :)

      Love and hugs

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  6. Again you have done the best pv.Very simple love story expressed as heart touching way .Wow for Wow.GBU.

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    1. Thanks so much Pravir :)

      U too TC

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  7. Lovely portrayal of the protagonist's conflict of thoughts. Great understanding of human feelings I must say.

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    1. Thank you so much Ramakant :)

      Truly loved your comment, touched!

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  8. Oh so romantic privy and the way you implanted the colours adds to its beauty.Indeed A WOW post!!

    http://sailorswiferamblings.blogspot.com/2013/09/thefacebookmania.html

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    1. Thanks so much:)

      I appreciate your stopping by today and leaving such a lovely comment here!

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  9. An intriguing story... and I realise that intrigue too has a medley of colours.

    Nice post.

    Arvind Passey
    www.passey.info

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    1. Thank you, coming from you this truly means a lot to me!!

      :)

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  10. You are really good at weaving stories on the complications in human relationships esp romance and love. Nice

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    1. Thanks so much Jaish... it is just that mad romantic in me that comes out every time :D

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  11. Simple yet profound...a point of realization..I am happy that he realized before the morning came over..:)

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    1. Oh yes.... otherwise maybe it would have been too late :P
      Thank you!

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  12. Wow...loved each line.. you have wrapped so much romance in the words interwoven with words... Lucky him that he realised it just in time

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    1. Thanks so much Shiva.... I am glad my intention of writing reflecting in those words!!

      :)

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  13. Very beautiful yet strikingly emotional. I love love stories from you :D

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    1. :)

      Thanks Sridevi and I love lovely comments from you :)

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  14. Gooooooood write-up. Reminds me of how sometimes relationships can be complicated.

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    1. Thanks Rejo so much for stopping by!! :)

      It's a pleasure to have you with your lovely comments!

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