Metro Diaries: Unlocked
Switching
off his alarm Salil got up from the bed and walked towards the balcony. He did
not need an alarm to wake up today though as sleep evaded him completely. He had
spent the whole night tossing and turning on the bed. Dawn announced its
arrival with orange rays of the sun kissing the earth. He saw a golden
wave engulfing everything around him in tight embrace. Stretching his
arms he admired the beauty around him wondering how mesmerizing it all
looked.
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........and after wakes up from her slumber hope she understands his love for her.Nice take on the WOW prompt.
ReplyDeleteOh yes Kalpana she does:)
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Aah the colors so well embedded in a romantic way
ReplyDeleteBeautiful privy !
U r so good at writing romantic episodes :)
Thanks Afshan :)
DeleteRomance is something I love writing the most... and it is a genre that is there forever in my mind.Perhaps thats what makes me write them soo much!!
How nice and lovely and romantic....and how pretty! I loved it! Thanks :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Kajal :)
DeleteYour comments always make me smile !
Some of us take more convincing than others to know the true power of love. Here, dear one, you have made it so crystal clear, yet woven a web of suspense over what might happen next.
ReplyDeleteMy thought? I pray they live happily ever after! :)
Beautiful!
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DeleteI just love the way you leave such beautiful comments on my blog Martha they are so touching, inspiring and at the same time manage to make me smile.
I would say AMEN to your lovely thought!!!
Thanks a ton, your comments are always looked forward to...
This is beautiful! The truth is we never understand how much we need/love a person until we are going to lose them.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully written!
Hugs!
True Aaekay and that is perhaps the most wonderful thing about love <3
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Love and hugs
Again you have done the best pv.Very simple love story expressed as heart touching way .Wow for Wow.GBU.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Pravir :)
DeleteU too TC
First time here - nice read.
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DeleteLovely portrayal of the protagonist's conflict of thoughts. Great understanding of human feelings I must say.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ramakant :)
DeleteTruly loved your comment, touched!
Oh so romantic privy and the way you implanted the colours adds to its beauty.Indeed A WOW post!!
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Thanks so much:)
DeleteI appreciate your stopping by today and leaving such a lovely comment here!
An intriguing story... and I realise that intrigue too has a medley of colours.
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Thank you, coming from you this truly means a lot to me!!
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You are really good at weaving stories on the complications in human relationships esp romance and love. Nice
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Jaish... it is just that mad romantic in me that comes out every time :D
DeleteSimple yet profound...a point of realization..I am happy that he realized before the morning came over..:)
ReplyDeleteOh yes.... otherwise maybe it would have been too late :P
DeleteThank you!
Wow...loved each line.. you have wrapped so much romance in the words interwoven with words... Lucky him that he realised it just in time
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Shiva.... I am glad my intention of writing reflecting in those words!!
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Very beautiful yet strikingly emotional. I love love stories from you :D
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DeleteThanks Sridevi and I love lovely comments from you :)
Gooooooood write-up. Reminds me of how sometimes relationships can be complicated.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rejo so much for stopping by!! :)
DeleteIt's a pleasure to have you with your lovely comments!