The Unspoken (55 fiction)



And I blushed….”Richa said turning red. I stared back at her in disbelief “What? You just blushed!!” Since past 1.5 years you kept talking about him every moment; today you met him and just blushed." Richa smiled sweetly and said “In that blush he would have heard much more than any words could have said."


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    1. Wow Kalpana - now this was something :)

      I just clicked post and there your comment. Love you for this <3

      And yes thanks sooooooo much!!

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  2. A blush... a mere blush
    Can be aflush
    With so much more
    Than words can store!

    Arvind Passey
    www.passey.info

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    1. Oh yes... you are right. A blush is more than a just a blush!

      Thanks so much for being here :)

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  3. There is so much in these words. Amazing Me! :)

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    1. Thanks so much Rachit, you never fail to bring a smile on my face with your comments always!

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    1. Thanks Tarang :)

      I thought of writing something small and sweet rather than the lengthy posts I have been doing off late!

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  5. Amazing my dear friend. She must be very happy to see him after 1.5 years. I can understand what she might have gone through. But her blush said much more.:D

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    1. Oh yes Sridevi, she definately was :)

      And thats the reason no words were required.....

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  6. a good attempt Privy :) can feel the emotion going through her :)

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    1. Thanks Saurabh:)

      Am glad I could do that within these words.

      Appreciate your stopping by and your follow too!

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    2. A good ...effective sweet piece of writing....

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    1. Thanks so much Supriya :)

      Am sorry for causing you so much trouble re. I have comments moderation on here and hence till I approve and post your comments are not visible.

      As always, your comments are always welcome with open arms <3

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  8. “In that blush he would have heard much more than any words could have said."

    I loved that line. :)

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    1. :)

      Thanks so much Jessica for stopping by!!

      Truly appreciate it.

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  9. Simply stated, yet elegant! Loved it!

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    1. :)

      Thanks so much .. I truly appreciate your words !

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  10. Cute :) And I smiled as I read it :) So true...My near and dear ones can make out so much about the way I am feeling when I start blushing - more than they understand when I try expressing myself with words :) :)

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    1. I agree Divya, our loved ones have the magical ability to read us through like an open book!

      Whether its a frown or a smile or just a blush :)

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  11. hmm sometimes men would fail to see such obvious things Me !

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    1. I know and agree Jaish but that usually happens once the affair has started :)

      In the wooing stages they understand even the untold!

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  12. Wow! Beautifully written Me.

    Hugs!

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  13. You did it!
    And was I wrong in thinking this topic was actually for 'you'! ;)
    Loved it. :)

    Congrats!
    <3

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    1. :D

      Nope you were right!!

      thanks so much!!

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  14. Awwwww...blush <3 <3
    Lovely post :)

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