Sweet Victory (55 fiction)


Tossing and turning in the bed she could hardly sleep that night. As the clock struck twelve she slowly got up and bent towards him as he lay next to her deep in sleep. Slowly she kissed him and said ‘Happy Anniversary sweetheart’ and smiled as she thought ‘I won…. I wished him first’.

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    1. Yes, very true. Life is a contest!

      Welcome here, hope to see you more often.

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  2. Dear Me,
    I have to laugh at your sense of humor. The poor man was asleep (LOL). Sadly, for some reason, women are always the first to say these magical words. My wife will tell you....I do say it first sometimes (smile). Great write my friend.

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    1. Hello Andy,

      Glad I could make you laugh. Yes he was asleep. And for her winning was the only thing in her mind. It is very truly said, ' Everything is fair in love and war'.

      We women do have this weird habit of wanting to be the first one to wish most of the times.

      Thanks for such a lovely comment!

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  3. :) This is really...really sweet!:)

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    1. He he he :)

      Thank you Tarang for such a sweet comment!

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  4. sweet victory and sweet defeat too.interesting.

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  5. The way many small and intricate feelings are described in this crisp post, it makes it a very sweet treat to read. I wish I could lose like this someday. :)

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    1. Glad you could see all the hidden emotions behind this post Leo, and AMEN to your wishes... !

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  6. Hey this is very sweet indeed. I win very often at this and I guess men just dont mind loosing in this case. Many a times, these act as reminders of the special day which they over the years do corner down in some remote compartment of their mind.

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    1. Thanks Sukku!

      Oh wow you have won so many times like this - thats really sweet and yes I agree men dont mind this at all. It is small acts like this which make ordinary moments become extra special.

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  7. Short and Sweet...

    Really liked it dear..

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  8. that was ultra cute..! how u said it all in those few lines, IMPRESSED I'm !! really..!

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    1. :->

      Geee... thanks so much for such a super sweet comment!!Loved it!!

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  9. Wow! Loved those emotions and feelings behind this short post! I love Sunday Scribblings! Don't ever stop writing them :)
    It's small moments like these that we preserve and remember years down the memory line :)
    But in my case, it's hardly ever me who remembers to wish first! I usually lose! Maybe things will change when I get married. :D

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    1. Hey...thanks so much for loving my Sunday Scribblings :)

      Yes these small moments are what make life worthwhile and make ordinary seem extra ordinary. Oh...yes I am sure things will change for you after marriage. Till then you have happy losing as this is a sweet defeat..!

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  10. I really like the way you pick up little sweet moments of life, and express them beautifully :)

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    1. Thanks Saloni, life with its all bitter sweet moments is itself beautiful!

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  11. very cute me. I had a smile on my lips when I read last lines. Yes I do sometimes with my best friend during friendship day and new year. I will be the first one to call and wish, and I win. On birthday's too I will be first one because I know how popular he is in his friends circle

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    1. :o)

      Thanks Sridevi, a smile on your lips says it all for Me!!

      These sweet yet small things of life add the much needed magic to it :)

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  12. Romantic...it shows how a good relation between couple inspires one to wish for the anniversary...even by being sleepless to be the first one to wish :)

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    1. Oh yes... these small small things sometimes help in keeping the romance alive for years between them!

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  13. WOW !! this looks like my first comment shout on blogs even when there is no competition to post first comments ;)

    How come i have missed this 55 fiction ? :-/ This is so nice and cute. I thought this time also you might have something different but turned out to be straight ending :P

    You won again :-/

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    1. :)

      Thanks! I wanted to give it a cute feeling... of that a couple madly in love with each other.

      YESSSSSSSSSS *jumping in the air* I won I won !!

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